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I wrote these two very different articles about stars for the Ohio Graduation Test Manual, published by Amsco, 2003. Students were asked to compare two approaches to stargazing.



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From the time the earliest human beings lived on earth, they gazed at the starry skies in wonder. As they sat by their warm fires in the evening, they looked above and created stories.

In the winter skies, you can easily spot the constellation "Orion the Hunter," with his dog Sirius at his feet. Myths about Orion go back as far as 2000 BC. In the Greek myth, Orion revealed his plan to rid the earth of all wild animals, and so was banished to the heavens. Another Greek myth involves Pegasus, the Winged Horse, who was said to fly out of the head of Medusa when she was slain by Perseus. Later, Zeus used Pegasus to carry his thunderbolts.

Many Native Americans tell stories about the stars, too. These sacred stories are passed from one generation to the next. Chippewa and Ojibwa tribes who live in the Great Lakes region tell the story of Fisher and Wolverine, and how they created spring and summer by climbing up and making a hole in the sky big enough for warm weather to come through for half the year. Fisher remains in the sky as the constellation that many people call the Big Dipper.

Stars have a daily place in our lives, too. When you were small, you probably sang the songs "Twinkle, Twinkle, Little Star" and "When You Wish Upon a Star." Some other famous star songs are "Stella By Starlight," "Stardust," "Don't Let the Stars Get in Your Eyes," and "Catch a Falling Star and Put It In Your Pocket."

Of course, you're never too old to make a wish on a falling star, and if something really good happens to you, you might "thank your lucky stars." Teachers, parents, and coaches encourage you to "reach for the stars" when you think about your future. On the other hand, if you're trying to excel at football, you might get hit so hard that you "see stars."

Stars play a big part in romance, too. If you fall madly in love, people might call you "starry-eyed." "Stardust" is that romantic, uncritical phase of new romance when you're convinced the other person is just about perfect. You can only hope that your romance will work out, unlike that of Romeo and Juliet, the famous "star-crossed lovers."

Stars are important symbols in government. The 50 stars of the Stars and Stripes are one example. Lots of states have flags that feature stars, too. Alaska's flag shows the Big Dipper and the North Star on a solid blue background. The flag of Texas, known as "the lone star state," has just one star. Ohio's flag has 17 stars. The 13 stars grouped around the circle in the middle represent the 13 original states of the union. The four stars added to the peak of the triangle symbolize that Ohio was the 17th state admitted to the union. Then of course there's our national anthem, "The Star-Spangled Banner."

Entertainment has its stars, too. There are movie stars, rock stars, sports stars, and just plain super stars. There's "Star Trek," "Star Search," and "Star Wars." The Dallas Stars is a hockey team, the Alabama Stars is a minor league baseball team, and baseball fans look forward to the major-league event that takes place halfway through the season, the All-Star Game.

Stars can even be found underwater and underground. There are starfish in the ocean, and a  funny tropical fish called the stargazer because its eyes are on top of its head. A tiny rodent called the star-nosed mole is another odd-looking creature.

Perhaps the most interesting thing about stars is this: Did you ever stop to think, as you made a wish on a falling star, that hundreds of other people in other cities and towns and states saw the same star fall -- and made their own wishes? Maybe stars can't really make wishes come true, but nearly everyone agrees that few things are more beautiful than a night sky filled with nature's sparkling diamonds.


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Stars live in galaxies, along with clouds of gas and interstellar dust. Stars are born in these clouds, which are called nebulae. When a star begins to form, hydrogen gas contained in a nebula is pulled together by gravity. The mass of gas begins to spin faster and faster, and the gas gets very hot. When the temperature reaches 15,000,000 degrees on the Celsius scale, a process called nuclear fusion begins to occur in the core of the nebula. Nuclear fusion gives off heat, and the heat causes the gas to glow. At this point in its life, the star is called a protostar.

The protostar continues to enlarge as it accumulates matter available in the nebula. When the accumulation of new matter stops, the star is called a main sequence star. In this phase of the star's life, gravity pushes against the ball of gas, keeping it together but also trying to make it collapse. The pressure of the hot gas inside the star, produced by nuclear activity, counteracts the force of gravity. As long as the balance holds--and it may be millions or billions of years--the star remains stable, a giant sphere of glowing gas.

In medium stars like our Sun, the nuclear activity in the core of the star continues. As it does, it converts hydrogen to helium. This conversion begins to cause instability in the star's core, and the outer shell of the star eventually begins to expand. The star is bigger, but it is also cooler, so it glows red rather than white. At this point in its life, the star is called a red giant.

When most of the nuclear fuel inside the star is finally used up, the gravity that has been pushing against it all this time wins out. The star collapses. It is now much smaller, but very dense, and it shines with a white-hot light. At this point, the star is called a white dwarf. Once the energy inside a white dwarf is gone, the star dies. It is now called a black dwarf.

If a star is a very massive one--say ten times the size of our sun--its demise can result in a supernova, a powerful explosion that lights up the sky for weeks and can reach temperatures of 1,000,000,000 degrees Celsius. The core of such a massive star becomes a neutron star, spinning rapidly and emitting radio waves. If the star emits pulsing radio waves, it is called a pulsar. These stars are still very large, but there is no nuclear fusion to push back against gravity. Eventually the core is swallowed by its own gravity, creating what is known as a black hole. Black holes swallow matter that gets too close to them.

It's important to remember that the life cycles of the stars described above take millions or billions of years to complete. In other words, there is no need to worry about our Sun--the closest star to planet earth--burning out any time soon.


Help Yourself by Helping Others

This article was also written for the Ohio Graduation Test Manual, but at the 10th-grade level. The student's task was to decide whether he or she agreed with the author's concept of teen volunteeerism, and to write a short essay explaining why or why not.

Ocala Gainesville Orlando Florida Freelance Writer Ocala Gainesville Orlando Freelance Editor Ocala Gainesville Orlando Freelance Articles Creator Freelance Developer Writer Editor Proofreader Copyeditor Articles Writer Freelance Writer Writing Test Preparation Manuals Teen volunteerism is on the rise in the United States as well as in other countries around the globe. According to Tom Culbertson, President and CEO of Youth Services America, US teenagers spent 2.4 billion hours of their time volunteering in 1999. Many schools now ask students to volunteer time in their communities as a requirement for graduation, and school clubs sponsor community service projects as well.

So why should you spend your time volunteering to help others when you'd rather be home playing video games or out shopping with your friends at the mall? There are many answers to this question.

First, of course, is the satisfaction of knowing that you have had a positive impact on your community. Teen volunteers restore run-down parks, transform abandoned lots into playgrounds and ball fields, and beautify their communities by planting flowers and painting murals on buildings. They participate in popular national and global programs like Habitat for Humanity and the National Wildlife Federation's Earth Tomorrow.

If you'd rather work on a one-to-one personal basis, you might volunteer to tutor a child who is having trouble with your favorite subject. People in nursing homes brighten up at the sight of young faces and are delighted to have someone read to them, write a letter for them, or simply spend time chatting.

Do you love animals? Then perhaps you'd like to volunteer at your local animal shelter. Dogs need exercise and play, cats need to be brushed and petted, and these activities help every shelter animal to become more adoptable because they react in a friendly and positive way to prospective adoptive families. Are you interested in more exotic animals? Then try volunteering at a zoo or wildlife rehabilitation center. If you're crazy about horses, check to see if your community has a Therapeutic Riding Association, where volunteers assist physically challenged children and adults in horseback riding activities.

Maybe you'd like to see another part of the world. A group of Las Vegas teens did just that in June, 2002, when they traveled to the jungles of Brazil to build classrooms for a children's shelter. Cincinnati teen Adhrucia Apana worked for a week in an orphanage in India, and after returning to the United States, she started an organization called Child by Child. It encourages kids to help raise funds for needy children.

There are plenty of travel opportunities within the United States as well. A number of conservation and environmental organizations sponsor "volunteer vacations" for outdoor enthusiasts who don't mind working for their food and lodging. Your contribution might be to help construct a new trail or repair an old one, help build cabins and tent sites, or cut firewood. You could find yourself anywhere from Acadia National Park in Maine to a national wildlife refuge in Montana. Your reward? A cozy cabin or tent, food cooked over a campfire, fantastic opportunities for recreation, and a lot of new friends from all over the country.

Are you still wondering "How can helping others help me?"

Volunteering can help you explore careers and give you some ideas about what you might like to do in the future. Did you love landscaping the local park? Maybe horticulture is the field for you. Did you find you love working with children? Then maybe you'd like to be a teacher. Volunteering at the hospital might make it clear to you that you'd really like to work in the health care field. Working in a national park might open up the possibility of becoming a wildlife biologist.

Here's another way volunteering can help you: As you develop new skills and talents, you are also acquiring references for job applications and resumes. If you helped build a house for Habitat for Humanity, you might be able to obtain summer work in construction. Your work with children translates to a job as a camp counselor or daycare worker. You might be hired in a veterinarian's office because of your work with animals at a shelter. If you think of volunteering as an unpaid job, you can easily see that it helps you to develop a sense of responsibility. By proving that you're reliable in a volunteer capacity, you let employers know they can count on you to be a dependable--and paid--employee.

If you're college-bound, your volunteer activities and accomplishments are a definite plus on your college and scholarship applications. Exemplary volunteers often win awards, and listing these on your applications can help you shine even more brightly in the eyes of admissions officers and scholarship committees.

The Prudential Spirit of Community Awards are given each year to teens whose volunteer efforts go "above and beyond." Emily Douglas of Powell, Ohio, won a Prudential award because she founded an organization that gathered and sent clothing, books, and toys to children in Appalachia. David Levitt, of Seminole, Florida, also won the award. He convinced his school district to donate unused food from 92 schools to a service that provides food to the hungry and homeless. Obviously, winning one of these awards would make you feel pretty proud of yourself.

Even if you can spare only a little of your time for community service, you can make a difference. You don't have to win an award to feel good about yourself. It can be a real self-esteem booster to know that people are sure they can count on you and that they truly appreciate what you're doing.

An old Greek proverb states, "A civilization flourishes when people plant trees under which they will never sit." Of course, the Greeks weren't really talking about trees. They were talking about giving a part of yourself to make your community, nation, or world a better place.

Knowing you have done that is the real reward of volunteering.

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